LO4: Offline edit

This is my offline edit of forty seconds for my film trailer Silence kills. This is the first starting draft on the trailer and used adobe premiere to edit this in and will continue to use this software throughout the making of the film trailer. What I thought went well was the shots that we used and who we used them to show the social outcast however I believe that the camera is too shaky within the shots at the beginning of the film trailer and then it begins to pick up the pace with the music and is begging to look more like a film trailer.